tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6013458352270200208.post8163411444589866952..comments2023-10-31T09:21:30.020-07:00Comments on Thomas Farrington, Artist in Residence @ UCA Rochester: Metropolis ReviewTFarringtonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04134992373226790515noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6013458352270200208.post-85520500141953392462011-10-26T14:13:01.413-07:002011-10-26T14:13:01.413-07:00Nice one Tom, just tweak that little bit Phil said...Nice one Tom, just tweak that little bit Phil said and that part with your first couple of quotes linking into what you are saying makes your review flow and really nice to read :DEmma Fosterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10552380993336130316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6013458352270200208.post-19138122453330606622011-10-26T12:08:43.063-07:002011-10-26T12:08:43.063-07:00A really engaging, entertaining review, Tom - BUT!...A really engaging, entertaining review, Tom - BUT! While you've got the citations now, you just need the surname of the author and the published date in the brackets (Abrams:2010) - as all the additional info should be in the bibliographic list. Also - you need to give titles to your illustrations - so 'Fig 1 - The New Tower of Babel' etc. But this is a huge improvement on previous efforts and that's very encouraging, Tom - more please! :)tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com