Tom - I need you to pay attention to the technical aspects of your reviews; you write engagingly, but these are not 'academic' as requested in so much as they are not evidence-based - i.e., you don't use quotes from reputable published sources to help you bolster, scaffold and enrich your own observations. Again, for weeks now, I've been saying 'don't use the first person in your academic writing' (i.e. I would say this is a pretty good film). Please consult the "Style Guide' in the Rough Guide to Written Assignments available on myUCA/Anatomy/Unit Materials. I'm expecting you to revisit this review and prepare it according to the written requirements of the brief.
Plse note - your images are missing, and one of your images exceeds the size of your template. More attention to detail please, Tom and more polish. This stuff matters.
Tom - I need you to pay attention to the technical aspects of your reviews; you write engagingly, but these are not 'academic' as requested in so much as they are not evidence-based - i.e., you don't use quotes from reputable published sources to help you bolster, scaffold and enrich your own observations. Again, for weeks now, I've been saying 'don't use the first person in your academic writing' (i.e. I would say this is a pretty good film). Please consult the "Style Guide' in the Rough Guide to Written Assignments available on myUCA/Anatomy/Unit Materials. I'm expecting you to revisit this review and prepare it according to the written requirements of the brief.
ReplyDeletePlse note - your images are missing, and one of your images exceeds the size of your template. More attention to detail please, Tom and more polish. This stuff matters.