A really engaging, entertaining review, Tom - BUT! While you've got the citations now, you just need the surname of the author and the published date in the brackets (Abrams:2010) - as all the additional info should be in the bibliographic list. Also - you need to give titles to your illustrations - so 'Fig 1 - The New Tower of Babel' etc. But this is a huge improvement on previous efforts and that's very encouraging, Tom - more please! :)
Nice one Tom, just tweak that little bit Phil said and that part with your first couple of quotes linking into what you are saying makes your review flow and really nice to read :D
A really engaging, entertaining review, Tom - BUT! While you've got the citations now, you just need the surname of the author and the published date in the brackets (Abrams:2010) - as all the additional info should be in the bibliographic list. Also - you need to give titles to your illustrations - so 'Fig 1 - The New Tower of Babel' etc. But this is a huge improvement on previous efforts and that's very encouraging, Tom - more please! :)
ReplyDeleteNice one Tom, just tweak that little bit Phil said and that part with your first couple of quotes linking into what you are saying makes your review flow and really nice to read :D
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