Trailer Music
EXPERIMENT IX
TRAILER – FIRST DRAFT
INT. BLACK SCREEN
The sound of a helicopter gradually fades
in
INT. CITYSCAPE OF JENNISBURG CITY
A helicopter flies over Jennisburg City
FEMALE NEWS
REPORTER 1
Jennisburg City’s
mayor, despite critical illness,
continues to make questionable decisions regarding
the recent protests-
MALE NEWS
REPORTER 1
-Fat Cat has
called for yet another show of military force against the city’s civilians-
FADE TO BLACK
INT. STREETS OF JENNISBURG
A
group of protestors face off against a line of militarized Jennisburg police
and a tank. The police raise their rifles and open fire on the protestors.
CUT
TO BLACK
MALE NEWS REPORTER 2
Many have spoken out against Fat Cat’s seat
in office, calling it a ‘corruption of Government’.
FEMALE NEWS REPORTER 2
Recent speculations attribute the mayor’s ‘unnatural
abilities’ to his iron grip on the city and his declining health.
INT.
FAT CAT’S LAIR
Fat Cat’s hand hovers over a control panel
where wires and electrical tubing infused in green psychic energy extent from
his hand and into the console.
FADE TO BLACK
INT. STREETS OF JENNISBURG
Military
police shove a struggling civilian protestor with a bag over his head into the
back of a truck. Televisions in the window of a technical appliance store show
Fat Cat talking to an interviewer
FAT CAT
Some might say I’m a monster. I disagree.
INT.
ISSAC’S BASE OF OPERATIONS
Issac
types at his computer and presses the enter key.
CUT
TO STREETS OF JENNISBURG
The
large digital billboards flash with static interference, briefly displaying the
words: “Fight for Freedom” followed by the Molenov Initiative logo.
FAT CAT
The real monsters are those who aim to
disturb the order I’ve created.
CUT
TO TV SCREEN
Fat
Cat is still being interviewed
INTERVIEWER
-and the online allegations of cloning for
an heir to your seat in power?
FADE
TO BLACK
INT.
CLONING FACILITY
9
fluid-filled cloning tanks fill the room containing 8 failed, experiments and
fetuses. All except one fully formed female clone.
FADE
TO BLACK
CUT
TO TV SCREEN
FAT CAT
Cloning is a fantasy.
FADE
TO BLACK
INT.
CLONING FACILITY
FAT CAT
If such things were a reality, it’s
possible for such subjects to ‘rebel’.
The
fully formed female clone leaps through and breaks through the glass, hands and
eyes glowing with purple psychic energy.
SCENE
FLASHES BLACK
FADE
INT. ROOFTOP
Experiment
9 ‘Kat’ looks over the city
KAT
Who am I?
INT.
JENNISBURG STREET
Kat,
wrapped in tattered sheets, walks through the streets and rips a propaganda
poster against the Molenov Initative off the wall.
ISSAC
I’ve seen the files. You’re an experiment.
A clone.
INT.
ALLEYWAY
Kat
hides behind a trash can while military police force another bag-headed civilian
into the back of a truck.
KAT
There’s so much injustice in this city.
What can we do?
INT.
ISSAC’S BASE
Issac
turns around in his seat from his computer and looks up at Kat
ISSAC
It’s called the Molenov Initiative.
CUT
TO KAT
Kat
clenches her fist out in front of her as purple psychic energy flows up her
arm.
KAT
How can I help?
FADE
TO BLACK
FADE
INT. CABINET
Two
iron doors slide open, revealing Kat’s new superhero costume
CUT
BACK TO ISSAC IN CHAIR
ISSAC
Let’s see what you can do.
CUT
TO BLACK
FADE
INT. TARGET PRACTICE FACILITY
Kat
throws an energy ball at a target robot and disintegrates it.
CUT
INT. JENNISBURG STREET
Kat
runs out of an alleyway and leaps into a psychic-energy motorcycle in the shape
of a cheetah as police sirens are heard in the background
CUT
TO VIEW OF POLICE CAR
Two
police cars collide. One flips over the other and explodes.
FADE
TO BLACK
CUT
INT. ROOFTOP
A
helicopter hovers just off the rooftop’s edge as it fires on Kat, who has
leaped out behind a wall, throwing two energy balls at the helicopter’s blades.
CUT INT. JENNISBURG STREETS
Kat
fights hand-to-hand with a military policeman.
CUT
INT. JENNISBURG STREETS
Kat,
in ethereal tiger form, growls and stomps on a tank’s barrel before bending it
upward with her hands.
FADE TO BLACK
FADE INT. ISSAC’S BASE
Issac
is staring at his computer screen, stunned in disbelief.
ISSAC
Damn.
FADE TO BLACK
FADE INT. JENNISBURG STREETS
FAT CAT
I want her found.
CUT TO SCREEN OF FAT CAT
FAT CAT
-And she will sit at my side in this new era.
CUT TO ALLEYWAY
Kat
raises her hands as a pair of firearms form from psychic energy in her hands in
her hands.
CUT
TO STREET
Kat
leaps out from an alley in her leopard form and, in slow motion, fires upon the
military barricade in the middle of the road.
CUT
TO ALLEY
A
hooded youth spray-paints the roman numerals IX on the wall.
KAT
I know what you tried to make me into
CUT
INT. ISSAC’S BASE
Issac
shifts around some holographic displays.
KAT
A power-hungry monster.
CUT
TO ALLEY
The
hooded youth continues to spray-paint the roman numerals IX on a brick wall.
ISSAC
Today we take back our city.
CUT
INT. ISSAC’S BASE
Issac
shifts around some more holographic displays and hits the enter key.
FADE
INT. STREET
Issac’s
silhouetted face is on a digital billboard in the city’s center. His voice is
masked and deepened.
ISSAC
This monster is responsible for the deaths-
FADE
TO BLACK
FADE
INT. DARK ROOM
Issac
is tied up to a chair with a single spotlight on him. He looks up in anger.
ISSAC
-and disappearances of hundreds of people.
CUT
TO FAT CAT ON-SCREEN
FAT CAT
They will learn NOT. TO. QUESTION!
CUT TO ALLEY
The hooded youth continues to spray-paint the roman numerals IX on a brick wall.
CUT
TO ROOFTOPS
Kat
is running across rooftops, leaping and flipping with boundless agility.
KAT
It’s time we finished this.
Kat
leaps off of a building to avoid an explosion
CUT TO INSIDE OF BUILDING
Kat roundhouse kicks a knife-wielding military policeman before another enters the fray.
FADE TO BLACK
CUT TO STREET
Kat revs her psychic-energy motorcycle and makes a U-turn in the road. before driving up the front of a police vehicle, doing a backflip before landing at the entrance of a tunnel and driving down into it.
FADE TO BLACK
CUT TO ALLEY
The hooded youth continues to spray-paint the roman numerals IX on a brick wall.
FAT CAT
You have no idea what you're dealing with, child.
CUT TO FAT CAT'S LAIR
Fat cat turns around from a computer as tendrils of metal, claw-like appendages descent from the ceiling.
FADE TO BLACK
CUT TO FAT CAT'S LAIR
Kat stands at the entrance to Fat Cat's lair, her hand swelling with purple energy as she prepares for battle.
CUT INT. STREET
A line of military police raise their rifles and arm them.
FADE TO BLACK
FAT CAT
(Mocking) So you consider yourself a hero?
CUT TO OUTSIDE WINDOW OF SKYSCRAPER
A tendril claw shatters the window, pushing Kat out with it in its grasp
KAT
This city doesn't need heroes. It needs hope.
CUT TO ALLEY
The hooded youth continues to spray-paint the roman numerals IX on a brick wall, finally finishing it.
KAT
I am that hope.
CUT TO BLACK
Everything cuts to black except the spray-painted IX which ignites in a purple ethereal fire. The word 'Experiment' forms in the same way in front of it.
It's certainly ambitious !
ReplyDeleteHey Tom,
ReplyDeleteGulp - you've got youths with bags on their heads, you've got policemen, vehicles, gosh almighty - are you serious? I love the ambition, I think you've got a very good ear and eye for scripting, but this is TOO BIG - even if you were to run it all year, certainly, if you're going to give sufficient time to animating and performing your characters. I think you need to have another go, and this time do it from the perspective of an experienced CGAA student (who also has a dissertation to complete) who knows full well how long rigging etc. takes, as opposed from the perspective of someone who wants to watch the version of the trailer you've just written. Dial it down - (all that lip-synching!) - use your experience to think more realistically about your outcome.